Another Day's Work

Wrote a bit of chapter 6 within SimpleNote this afternoon, it's really great to have the text handy all the time via browser or my phone. I'm struggling on the dialogue, though; it just seems so lackluster. Will give it another night and see if I have better ideas tomorrow.

Today's favorite sentence is totally spoiler, so here is my second favorite passage:

She was lying in the middle of a large grassy field, shielding her eyes against the afternoon sunlight to look at the passing clouds. The grasses undulated in the breeze like jaunty cat tails. There was a clump of trees at the very edge of the field just out of her sight, and a little brook.

 One handwritten notebook reconciled into Scrivener.