Mapping out the lay of the city (the positions of the castle, the shrine, the castle park, the sacred woods) made continued work on ch4 easier, even though I haven't completely planned out how everything will look. I also drew Van's rooms and his study, as they're other scenes in the first part of DS. It's pretty hard to plan room layout as how Van would arrange things. Fanelia seems to be pretty sparse on details and more about functionality, and I'm not exactly aquainted with bachelorpads, lol.
Long sentences are hard to write:
That made Hitomi uneasy about past rumors and what Van had told his staff of her intruded stay in Fanelia, and she tried to keep her head high and to not think about what this man might have heard of her as she followed his broad back through the crowd.
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