Ch2 is almost there, except for a scene between Hitomi and Merle that I want to get right. Merle has accepted Hitomi's return from the moment of her arrival, so besides Merle's lines and actions, I want to make Hitomi reflect on why Merle would feel that way despite her long absence. Female-female interaction is tricky to get all the right feelings down; there's so many nuances.
I tweaked a few more words in ch3, and now it's really finally done. Touching it further would probably just make it worse ;x
No sentence for you guys today. They're either small changes from before or something that gives too much away.
2 comments:
Hmmm... I never liked Merle. I guess that in my opinion, Merle should try to help Hitomi and Van to be together.
Have you posted it yet, your fic? ^^
I also think Merle should try to get them together, but Merle has her own schedule of when she wants to do things. You can't command cats, you know ;3
My pic is posted!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3048890/1/
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